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An aspiring English writer living in California, working on prose and screenplays. With a degree in Film and Video production, and some success in screenwriting awards.

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Hitchhiker's Guide, To Kill a Mocking Bird, Electric Kool-Aid Acid Test, On The Road, Colin Bateman, Terry Pratchett, Charlie Kauffman screenplays.

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Across The Pond

Alex Butterfield

A fictionalised account of an English exchange student's adventures in California.


In 2004 John left the wet and windy North-East of England to study in San Jose, CA. He moved in to the International House at San Jose State, where 70 students from around the world live together, and found it to be the boarding school he'd never been to. Reacting to authority by devolving into an immature joker, he finds his every action misunderstood, but puts it down to the, ever-popular, 'culture-shock'. When he finds himself on the brink of being thrown out of the I-House, and the university, for a series of misinterpreted and unconnected incidents he recounts the darkly comic paint-job that left him in this corner. This episodic comedy is not only about the cultural differences between the US and the UK; it looks at international culture with a sceptical eye. Society might just be pathetic, and John is aware that he is no exception - but at least he can see through the veil of convention and bureaucracy, and that might be his saving grace. He's going to need one.

 

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Daniel Delacy wrote 798 days ago

Care to swap reads? Apocalypse Then

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Hi Alex Do you fancy some alternative entertainment over the Christm....

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I wrote 907 days ago

Just read Chapter 1. I find the dialogue kinda cheesy at times - don't know if that's what you're going for. I like the action - the knowledgeable use of terminology really gives this an air of authority which is important for it to work. But I think it feels a little researched at times - not becau... view book

I wrote 907 days ago

I like it - I'm going to ramble on now. At the end of this chapter the driver goes from being a character with some depth to a character without any. Literally (well not literally, literally) but on the surface he is angry at kids (when really he's angry at himself for betraying/beating? his wif... view book

I wrote 907 days ago

thanks Andrew - I'll check your work out. Adverbs around speech is something I never even thought of, I'll think about it now and see if i can find where I use them. i'm sure that now it's been suggested it will stick out like a sore thumb. (I never thought about what that expression means, it's ... view book

I wrote 1208 days ago

I really like this draft of Chapter 1. I've said some of this stuff before, but who cares? It's really funny, easy to read, more to-the-point than it was. paralleling the decision made by the creature with Phil's is very funny, but the line about the continuation of his genes is really funny. I l... view book

I wrote 1217 days ago

Well - I've uploaded the next chapter. It's a first draft so please, take it harshly. If there's bits you hate, tell me. cheers. view book

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