Hi Elizabeth, Sorry about taking so long to comment, but there has been a valid reason. I read your posting with interest and enjoyed it to a degree. However, there's something not quite right and damned if I can put my finger on it. I have reread it three times and just cannot analyse what makes i... view book

Hi Grant, Did not think I would be commenting so soon, but I had a spare hour and read a few more chapters at random, including 13, the battle of the Nile. This is the sort of book that I go for. It entertains as well as educates. You write well, bringing history to life and you should be proud of ... view book

Hi Steve, Have read the first few chapters of your book and found that it flowed very well. You balance characterization with background detail to keep the reader enthralled. I did think that there was a little too much exposition at the start, perhaps some of this could be held back. Tease the rea... view book

Hi Jose, As already mentioned I did put the book on my WL, but I have too much to read at the moment to place it on my bookshelf. Nothing to do with your writing, more to do with my timetable. AJ view book

Hi Jose, Very dramatic opening for The Obergemau File. It draws the reader in, making sure he'll read on. However the dying protagonist is a little hackneyed, but you seem to have avoided the more obvious pitfalls. Well done. Have noted your comments on Churchill's Queen, you're the second to have ... view book