I read this! and I think it's really good! I loved the begining though I felt my concentration leaving me as I read on only to come back in the 2nd chapter...I liked your pitch and you obviously know where you're taking the story and it's got a nice feel to it, atleast I felt it. ~Good luck. ~Tab view book

Great pitch! drove me to read ! 1st chapter was brilliant! I liked how you made a murder mystery original because ofcourse with CSI and all the other muder investigating shows on T.V, it's rather difficult to surprise the reader and keep him glued to the book. I loved it! best of luck! ~Tab view book

Ok so when I first read the pitch, the first thing that popped in my head was , ''Eragon'' because of the whole dragon thing. I don't know if you have read that but when I actually started reading ''Sanctuary's Loss' I was really surprised since I didn't expect it to be so engaging and exciting. I a... view book

I think I've read and already commented on this book but what the heck, I can do that again!.:)...This book is awesome. Loved christina! and glad to see that she isn't a whinny, boring and self deprecating heroine! The tale is gripping, exciting and sucks the reader right in...It's brilliant. ~all ... view book

I think I read your book and commented on it too but oh well! what the heck, i can do it again.:). It's simply awesome! I love christina! I'm glad she isn't the whinny boring heroine. Loved the first chapter! It's exciting, thrilling and sucks the reader right in. You have done a brilliant job. all... view book