Sunday Morning Muse by Gabby

Sunday morning mind wanderings

Few short stories for fun

  • Classification: Moderate
  • Work is: Extract only on Authonomy
  • First submitted May 15, 2010
  • Last updated May 15, 2010
Sunday Morning Muse
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  • Retired user
    Zigeroon wrote 3 years ago

    Hi. Really enjoyed the twist at the end of Doctor John. Only one read so far. A real sense of the moment, could almost feel the sea and taste the salt; not forgetting the vinegar! Will return and read the others.

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    gabs lost account wrote 3 years ago

    One day I'll sort this out, lol
    Gabby

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    Barry Wenlock wrote 4 years, 10 months ago

    EXCELLENT WRITING.
    Backed with pleasure,
    Barry
    LITTLE KRISNA AND THE BIHAR BOYS

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    lynn clayton [Retired] wrote 4 years, 11 months ago

    This is my kind of writing. I cursed that the first story was so short. By far the best descriptions on Authonomy. The meat in ' Seasoned' was quite sinister.
    You have a real gift for writing. I love your stories. But I prefer full length novels. I wish you had one. Have you?
    Backed with best wishes. lynn

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    name falied moderation wrote 5 years ago

    Gabby ingenius, funny, strange at times but good. well written and will go through again. Creative writing and easy flow. wow BEST of luck. Please could you take the time to read my book or some of, and comment on it so I get more guidance, for me it is about growth as a writer. Thank you and again BEST of luck.

    Denise
    'The Letter'

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    klouholmes wrote 5 years ago

    Hi Gabby, These gradually mount to a chuckling hilarity. I liked how you concentrate on the awful weather rather than the doctor’s excessive and finally suspicious care for his patient. The cross-dressing seemed like a joke at first but the focus on the dress and Mike’s promotion was revealing. Bizarre and funny! Shelved – Katherine (The Swan Bonnet)

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    missyfleming_22 [Retired] wrote 5 years ago

    These were very enjoyable! I especially enjoyed Wasp, we all wonder what would happen with the lotto don't we? Well written and entertaining! Each one is individual and could stand alone. Thanks for a nice read!

    Missy
    Mark of Eternity

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    mikegilli wrote 5 years ago

    Read Seasoned and Wasp.. both brilliantly done with
    thoroughly entertaining twists.
    Shelved with pleasure
    mikegilli The Free

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    Andrew Burans wrote 5 years ago

    A most enjoyable collection of short stories which are finely crafted, well paced and well written. You have a vivid imagination and you switch topics with ease. The receipe for a Leg looks interesting and I agree with Dr. John about pregnant women. Backed with pleasure.

    Cheers,
    Andrew Burans
    The Reluctant Warrior: The Beginning

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    A Knight wrote 5 years ago

    Short stories are challenging at best, and I think it shows a great skill to put them together as well as you have. Each one is a slice of delicious fiction, and your strong voice makes them stand out from the crowd.

    Backed with pleasure.
    Abi xxx

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    AuthorTom wrote 5 years ago

    Backed with confidence! Tom Ryerson (Carnal Wreckage)

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    sjbal [Retired] wrote 5 years ago

    Hi Gabby,
    Really good writing and great imagination - Backed.
    Good luck,
    James (The Lycetta Legacy).

  • Retired user
    donmac wrote 5 years ago

    Hi Gabs - you did it!! - Hope it goes well.

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    Burgio [Retired] wrote 5 years ago
    SUNDAY MORNING MUSE This is an interesting collection of short stories. I started with the doctor who mutters about pregnant women, then read the one about the recipe for the leg, then the one about George and the ladies room (liked the way he makes up stories for people on buses; I do that too because of that same song). You have a good writing style for short stories; just enough detail to set scenes and establish characters; not so ...
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  • A. Zoomer's avatar
    A. Zoomer wrote 5 years ago

    Why not call the collection: Recipes for Open Minded People? it changes the emphasis from the author musing to the reader.
    Keep writing, I am enjoying these stories.
    A Zoomer- a boomer with zip
    Going Out in Style

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    Peterleeds wrote 5 years ago

    Is that recipe real? Where did you get it from?

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    harvey is the man wrote 5 years ago

    Some great little stories. Ted and Ed Ghosts?

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    soutexmex wrote 5 years ago
    Welcome aboard, Gabby. This website will improve your writing craft, if you allow it. You have to think of your pitches as your sales tool to grab the casual reader's eyes. The short pitch does not exist. With the long pitch, expand a story arch and then break it down into smaller paragraphs so it reads faster. End it with one succinct question to pique interest. Perfecting your pitches is how you climb in ranking to gather more exposure and ...
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  • Lorri's avatar
    Lorri wrote 5 years ago

    Backing to give us both a boost.

    :)