Fantastica VOLUME 2 (Updated unpublished BETA version) by Victorio Velasquez

This is a sneak a peek into the yet unedited/unformatted volume 2 of my parody/satire series set to be published sometime this year. ENJOY

To put it in a nutshell, this answers the "what happened to Dope" question and picks up on the development of the invasion force being led by Shit. This new volume has even more of the same humor along with the flare for dramatic intrigue intermixed with the intense action of epic battles that sets it apart from the first volume. FANTASTICA!! The literary future of satire is already here!!

  • Classification: Adult
  • Work is: Fully available on Authonomy
  • First submitted Oct. 28, 2012
  • Last updated Oct. 28, 2012
Fantastica VOLUME 2 (Updated unpublished BETA version)
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  • maretha's avatar
    maretha wrote 2 years, 6 months ago
    Fantastica Volume 2 (Unpublished Version) Again, I'm amazed at your imaginative mind and where you've taken the reader in this second volume. But having said that Victorio, please allow me to give you some guidelines as far as using dialogue is concerned. Dialogue is necessary to keep the body of a story together, just like a skeleton keeps our bodies straight up, or gives us a definite shape, encourages movement (obviously much more involved) Dialogue helps the reader to form ...
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    NowSpeakTruth wrote 2 years, 9 months ago
    I began reading this and enjoyed your sense of humor and like the concept, but the pargraphs are simply too blocky. Not sure if this is an authonomy slip or just your preference of formatting but being entirely honest, reading computer screens in general give me a headache, and your huge paragraphs didn't do much to help. I like the high vocabulary in this, it odds to the quirky world of your old characters. I'd love to continue reading this ...
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    Thalia wrote 2 years, 9 months ago

    I love your sense of humor! Your details are vivid and well-drawn. I felt pulled into the bizarre and silly world of Dope, Shit, Redd, and the obese, orange Louie. I've given Fantastica Volume 2 a top star ranking. My only humble suggestion would be to break up your paragraphs into shorter ones because they are quite long. It's easier for the reader to follow long scenes (such as in chapter one) if it's broken down into shorter paragraphs.