- The Hiss of the Hourglass by Mungo Blunt
This captures the period well enough. Perhaps you could make the dialogue move less in paragraphs ...
- To Kill a Dead Man by Dan D. Andreescu
This is so well written - great pacing, ready to sell. Backed with pleasure.
- Cross Talk by Terrence Allen Gilbert
This is very well written - I am concerned about the characters - especially Andrea and ...